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     [Accepted] Application:Rahmes

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    Rahmus



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    Join date: 2012-03-26

    PostSubject: [Accepted] Application:Rahmes   Mon Mar 26, 2012 7:19 pm

    Desired In-Game Name:
    [What name would you like to see yourself having in game?]

    Your SW:TOR Forum Account Name:
    Rahmus

    Your Age:
    20

    Your sex: M

    Your local time zone:
    EST

    How did you Hear About Us?:
    [Friend

    How much do you know about Star Wars?:
    I've seen the movies never read the books . Ever since this game came out i have been looking at Wookeepedia for some random information on races and history

    What is your MMORPG Resumé?:
    Star WArs Galaxies before SOE

    Have you been in any other SW:TOR guilds?:

    Short Character Bio
    Race: Zabrak

    Age:
    26

    Character class:
    Jedi Guardian

    Character sex:
    M

    Homeworld: Iridonia

    Small History: A Zabrak who dosn't belive in failure. He is a battle ready soilder who has been notice for being force sensative. He is willing to aid the Republic and the Jedi order in any way he can. He is strictly disceplined and does not waste time on those who can hold him back. Becoming a JEdi was considered a test to him in which he feels he must not fail.
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    akicita
    Jedi Knight


    Posts: 484
    Join date: 2011-08-06

    Character sheet
    Race: Miraluka
    Birth Year: unknown
    Division and/or Class: Knight - Jedi Guardian

    PostSubject: Re: [Accepted] Application:Rahmes   Mon Mar 26, 2012 8:42 pm

    Thank you for applying to the guild. We are always searching for solid rpers to fill the ranks of our guild but I would have to ask you to tweak your back story a little more. All the ambition you are showing are sure signs of the darkside. The back story is to be filled out as close to lore and this time period as possible. So what I'm asking you to do is look over your story again and rewrite it from a jedi prospective and not a character profile. Give more detail on where you are from your culture what drives you to have those ambitions. Once that is complete I will more then happy to approve your application thank you for your time.

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    Rahmus



    Posts: 2
    Join date: 2012-03-26

    PostSubject: Re: [Accepted] Application:Rahmes   Mon Mar 26, 2012 9:07 pm

    Rahmes backstory attempt 2: Rahmes a Zabrak from Iridonia. He was a strong and couragous Zabrak and proud of his blood. Even though he had shown signs of being a brute he was always one to show his remorse for others.
    Rahmes was Noticed for being force sensative when he was 16. His mother and father urged him to leave the farm to practice the ways of the force. Rahmes felt he would have no problem taking the path of a Jedi since he has always been practicing how to fight with a blade. He thought this would just be a chance to test his skills
    But soon leaving after Iridonia Rahmes would learn it would take more then a blade to overcome the enemies that would challenge him.
    Rahmes borded the next shuttle that was ment to head to Tython when he said his final goodbyes to his parents.
    Rahmes mother words before he left would always be stuck in his head "You are leaving to be a Man, a Jedi but don't let that overcloud the fact you will always be an Zabrak"
    Rahmes would never forget this oppoutunity of representing his people and plans to do great things in making Iridonia proud....
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    Daak Tainer
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    Posts: 226
    Join date: 2011-06-23

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    Race: Human
    Birth Year: 14 BTC
    Division and/or Class: Padawan - Jedi Guardian

    PostSubject: Re: [Accepted] Application:Rahmes   Mon Mar 26, 2012 11:11 pm

    Rahmus wrote:
    Rahmes backstory attempt 2: Rahmes a Zabrak from Iridonia. He was a strong and couragous Zabrak and proud of his blood. Even though he had shown signs of being a brute he was always one to show his remorse for others.
    Rahmes was Noticed for being force sensative when he was 16. His mother and father urged him to leave the farm to practice the ways of the force. Rahmes felt he would have no problem taking the path of a Jedi since he has always been practicing how to fight with a blade. He thought this would just be a chance to test his skills
    But soon leaving after Iridonia Rahmes would learn it would take more then a blade to overcome the enemies that would challenge him.
    Rahmes borded the next shuttle that was ment to head to Tython when he said his final goodbyes to his parents.
    Rahmes mother words before he left would always be stuck in his head "You are leaving to be a Man, a Jedi but don't let that overcloud the fact you will always be an Zabrak"
    Rahmes would never forget this oppoutunity of representing his people and plans to do great things in making Iridonia proud....

    Heh..my good man this is much better. However, you may want to just edit your original post and replace your history there with that Wink
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    Torren Starfire



    Posts: 860
    Join date: 2010-09-25
    Location: New York

    Character sheet
    Race: Human
    Birth Year: 12 BTC
    Division and/or Class: Knight - Jedi Sentinel

    PostSubject: Re: [Accepted] Application:Rahmes   Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:23 pm

    Welcome! Jedi Knight
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    Jamck Sodhou



    Posts: 378
    Join date: 2011-06-20
    Location: Houston, Tx

    Character sheet
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    Birth Year: 12 BTC / 3665 BBY
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    PostSubject: Re: [Accepted] Application:Rahmes   Wed Mar 28, 2012 6:31 am

    Welcome to KoS, Rahmes! Jedi Knight
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    Sorn Karibe



    Posts: 404
    Join date: 2011-07-28
    Location: NV

    Character sheet
    Race: Human
    Birth Year: 7 BTC
    Division and/or Class: Knight - Jedi Guardian

    PostSubject: Re: [Accepted] Application:Rahmes   Wed Mar 28, 2012 9:57 am

    Welcome to KoS!
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