[Accepted] Application: Ciela

Well, I'm back... I was told the applications were deleted, but I was also told you're recruiting again! Yay! So I return!

Desired In-Game Name:
Ciela Yuain

Your SW:TOR Forum Account Name:
Pseudonic
But I'm not active on SWTOR official forums.

Your Age:
18, going 19 in July :3

Your sex:
Female

Your local time zone:
EST

How did you Hear About Us?:
Bumped into Gale, seemed cool.

How much do you know about Star Wars?:
I'm a fangirl. Big time fangirl. Read the Revan book and look up a lot of stuff on wookiepedia. I love saber lore and I also love doing RP duels.

What is your MMORPG Resumé?:
Um... LONG list... But I'll try! ^.^;


There's more but I can't remember! D: Oh well.

Have you been in any other SW:TOR guilds?:
Currently an Officer in Dusk.

Short Character Bio

Race:
Iridonian

Age:
About 20

Character class:
Sentinel, Though Ciela will be a Sabermaster ICly. Not now, of course... Sabermaster Padawan would be silly.

Character sex:
Female

Homeworld:
Unknown. Presumed Iridonia. Raised on Tatooine.

Small History:
Ciela always was different. Very unpredictable and aggressive, she doesn't speak of her past. What is known about her from records is that she was raised on Tatooine by a group of Mandalorians, which kept her for entertainment. She would fight other survivors or other animals, and eventually the Mandalorians taught her Echani Martial Arts.

One day, the Mandalorian Raiders were killed by Republic Forces lead by Jedi Knight Ebrahm Valx. Knight Valx took Ciela back to Tython for training where she has spent the past two years of her life training under various Temple Masters. Unfortunately Knight Valx is unavailable for commentary- He was recently found KIA on a Republic operation on Nar Shadaa.

Ciela has become quiet and disciplined in her time with the Jedi. She has taken to Lightsaber Combat Training quite nicely. Though learning the ways of the Jedi and basic lightsaber forms, she has taken to Form IV: Ataru and Form II: Makashi with flying colors.

Welcome! Round 2 style. Look forward to seeing you in game.

hehe
Ty! ^.^

Now that my main is lvl50 and I only have to do my WZ dailies, I'll have more time for playing alts.

Ciela when your in game go ahead and Join /cjoin Kosooc and say hi so we can get you a invite into the guild.

Welcome to the guild

Akicita wrote:

Welcome to the guild

hehe, ty! ^w^

Great to see that we finally got you into the guild, this will be fun!

Ciela,

Two things...

1) I just finished pt 2 of the fan fiction you are writing. I really like it as the character's motivations our believable and the fight scenes are described well where I can picture them in my head. I really liked the opening of chapter 2 and how you used a minor character's perspective to move the story along. It keeps it fresh and mysterious. Once you get a new chapter up, make a new post in the books section, so we all know we can read the next one.

2) Not a requirement by any means but most people change their username to their character's first and last name in game. It makes it a lot easier to tell who is who when you go back and forth between the game and forums. Just a suggestion.

Gep Korr wrote:

Ciela,

Two things...

1) I just finished pt 2 of the fan fiction you are writing. I really like it as the character's motivations our believable and the fight scenes are described well where I can picture them in my head. I really liked the opening of chapter 2 and how you used a minor character's perspective to move the story along. It keeps it fresh and mysterious. Once you get a new chapter up, make a new post in the books section, so we all know we can read the next one.

2) Not a requirement by any means but most people change their username to their character's first and last name in game. It makes it a lot easier to tell who is who when you go back and forth between the game and forums. Just a suggestion.

1) Why ty! :D I've gotten really bogged down IRL so I haven't had much creative sparks to update, which is really sad. Any negative critiques? I always like praise, but constructive comments make the work better, not make me feel better. ;3

2)Done!

Welcome to Kos and congrats

I'm a bit late to the party, but I'd like to express my welcome for you.

Glad you chose KoS and I hope you enjoy your stay with us.

hehe... Thanks guys! :3

Ciela going to promote you to Initiate as you have joined the clans and been with us for more than the two weeks.